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post #1 of 12 (permalink) Old 02-24-2010, 02:27 AM Thread Starter
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Betta Story (W/LOTS of Pics!!)

So for my Spanish class we had to write/create a book for 2nd grade bilingual kids. We're going to their class to read it to them. Naturally I thought about fish to write the story about! So here it is, included with uncolored drawings and english subtitles. Not the best drawings, lol. Especially the shrimp. :P

Chile and The Rescue

One day Chile was swimming in his tank with his shrimp friend, Sheila

Their owner, Manny, bought them a new castle decoration.

The castle was white nad gray. It was made of bricks.

They were excited to explore it.

While Chile was swimming through the window, he got stuck!

He tried to swim free but he couldn't. So he tried to wiggle free and stilll couldn't.

He was scared he would never get out.

Then Sheila saw Chile and went over to help him.

Sheila pushed and pushed and pushed Chile until finally Chile escaped!

Chile was very happy.

He thanked Sheila and they went to play in the bubbles.

They were best friends after that.


El FIN!

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Aww, thats absolutely ADORABLE!! <333 I LOVED it :)

And those drawings are awesome, way cute xD SO much better then anything I could do ;)
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Maybe you should change it to Chile and the Ant LOL.

jk - that was very cute :)

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I love it!!! That is a wonderful! story!! You deserve an A+!!
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That was sooooo cute. :D


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AW!!!!! I Loved it! That's so cute!

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I love it!!! That is a wonderful! story!! You deserve an A+!!
I did! 49/50!
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Aww! That's so cute! Get it published!! Haha I liked it!
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Ye, it should be published!!
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Aww - that's awesome!! That made my day - I'm a Spanish teacher and love bettas!! woohoo!! awesome!! if you ever need any help with Spanish - send me a PM - seriously!! i'd be glad to help!
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