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post #1 of 20 (permalink) Old 02-18-2013, 11:01 PM Thread Starter
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You can post your short sotries, poems, etc. here, You should always title your post and make it copy righted incase someone tries to steal your ideas, but i thought it'd be cool to read everyones short stories, i like reading, and writing. Poems are always fun too! so, please post some short stories.., I'll post mine. But its scary soooo... If you don't like scary stories, skip mine! i love scary stuff!! Please, if you don't like scary stories don't let mine ruin it for you :) You can aways read other peoples. Mines not really scary yet..... It will evetnually be a whole book im hoping. Please excuse the many typos, i havent gotten far enough to go back and correct them :) My story is for mature audiences, there are a few curse-words. I would delete them but i had to scan them onto here so i can't really edit the type....
I'm doing them in links because if you don't want to read it, you don't have to even see it, mainly because it's a scary book. So when the image pops up on the site, if you click on it; it becomes larger. I know it's hard to read but its all i could do, sorry... :/ and i didnt make the cover image, i have no rights to it, i edited it by applying the font. The person who created it is Constantine Sekeris. He works with FX studios, and has done many pictures for films like hellboy 2, blade i think, and a few others. BTW ive actually edited quite a few things in here, some things just sounded stupid so i got rid of them, others weren't the right wordings, i didn't upload the newest versions... so ignore any grammer, spelling, or stupid lines.
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I figured i would get the thread started by posting some of my favorite lyrics to one of my favorites songs by Matchbox 20

"3 AM"

She say it's cold outside and she hands me my raincoat
She's always worried about things like that
She says it's all gonna end and it might as well be my fault
And she only sleeps when it's raining
And she screams and her voice is straining


She says baby
It's 3 am I must be lonely
When she says baby
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes
Says the rain's gonna wash away I believe it

She's got a little bit of something, God it's better than nothing
And in her color portrait world she believes that she's got it all
She swears the moon don't hang quite as high as it used to
And she only sleeps when it's raining
And she screams and her voice is straining


She believes that life is made up of all that you're used to
And the clock on the wall has been stuck at three for days, and days
She thinks that happiness is a mat that sits on her doorway
But outside it's stopped raining

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Great thread! I have some things, but I will post this. Just a prose for a book. When I am done this semester with classes I am going to do an overhaul

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Your really good at writing!!

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Your really good at writing!!
Thanks Mister. I thought I commented on yours, but somehow I didn't lol.

I do like your take on the supernatural!

It looks like we are the only two in here!
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Lol, fine by me, or maybe every one else doesn't like sharingstuff on the web. lol

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I love your betta's name "Fat Amy"


Add one more thing to keep this topic relevant

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Do you wirte often?

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I don't write as often as I should. Need to really get on writing a little bit each day. I also read a ton so that has helped develop myself. Also helps that English is one of my favorite classes!

How about you? do you write a lot?
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I draw more than i write but i usually put poems to my art.

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