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Chapter 16

Tim heard the footfalls, and was too scared to move. He stood still. Why are you sitting there? He thought. Move it! But it was too late. Someone walked up and almost saw him, but he dove into a trashcan. A tall, thin woman thought she heard something, but then she shrugged and walked on. Tim climbed out of the trashcan, and followed her. She walked into an office, where he heard her putting water in a cup, and sipped it. Then she sat down. Tim walked upstairs, only to find a large pool. He ran over to it, and saw the female orca. “It’s alright, girl. We’ll get you home.” He walked over to a box, opened it up and took out a fish. He fed it to her, and then turned on his DS.
Derek walked out of the office and looked around. He saw nothing, and walked up stairs. Charlene and Chip walked out of an office across the hall. Chip switched on his DS, and started typing.

Chipndale: Tim! Derek cuming ur way!

Tim: Yeah, I know. I found the orca, and I’m cuming down.

Chipndale; See u down stairs.

Tim: kay.

Tim hid behind a wall, and Derek walked up to check on the orca. Tim ran down stairs to meet up with the others.

"Do your duty in all things. You cannot do more, you should never wish to do less."
~Robert E. Lee
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