Here are the first 3 chapters.
The Case Of The Missing Orca
The SeaWorld Adventures.
“Good morning. You’re the one who has reported the missing orca?”
“Thank you. Tell me your name.”
“Tim. Tim Michals.”
Thank you. We will get back to you.
One Month Earlier
“Tim? Tim? Is that you?” His mom said. “I’m getting up,” Tim yelled down. “Hurry! You’ll miss the bus!!” Living in Orlando, Florida, he knew that there were theme parks all around him. But one was his favorite. It was SeaWorld. SeaWorld was just around the corner, and Tim loved going there after school. Unfortunately, the 7th grade wasn’t kind to him. He was loaded with homework and tests. But as he walked on the bus and it rolled away, he realized something. He forgot his homework – which was already 3 days late. “Shoot!” he said under his breath. Only, he didn’t say shoot.
He didn’t have the best technology, but his mom did buy him a DS. He switched it on at about 8:45, and his friend, Chip, was online, too.
Tim: what are you doing chip?
Chipndale: did you do your homework?
Tim: no. I left it at home! :/
Chipndale: Where are u?
Tim: passing ur neighborhood.
Chipndale: oh. I’m at the school, gtg!
Tim: see u.
He switched off his DS, and got off the bus. He walked into his homeroom class, with Mrs. Yearwood. “Alright! Take out your book and read! I don’t want to hear a word from you guys or I will give you a detention!” she yelled. Tim took out his book and read. “Also! I want to see your homework, Tim! Take it out!” she yelled. Tim took a deep breath and gulped.
The detention room was small, and only had a few desks. A large woman was in there, and she wore glasses, and had freckles all over her body. Her name was Mrs. Bayless. Mrs. Yearwood escorted him into the room. She was an old, scrawny woman, who was the strictest teacher in the whole school. He saw one student, Rick, (The bully), looked up and gave him the evil eye. Mrs. Yearwood whispered something in Mrs. Bayless’ ear, and gave him another copy of his (Late) homework. “Finish this,” Mrs. Yearwood told him, “and then you may go to your next period.” She walked away, and Tim began. He had to do some reading, math, and Language Arts packets for the state test. He started, but then his eyes became heavy.
He fell asleep.
"Do your duty in all things. You cannot do more, you should never wish to do less."
~Robert E. Lee
Last edited by bloo97; 10-02-2010 at 12:54 PM.