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post #1211 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 05:21 PM
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Good luck on the story!

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post #1212 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 05:22 PM
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Thanks :D

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Ezekiel - Butterfly DT Male
Schnappi - Blue & Green HMPK Male
Midnight - Forest Green & Blue HM Male
Yuki-Onna - Blue & Clear CT Female
Powder - White & Clear DeT Male
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post #1213 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 05:34 PM
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What's it about?

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post #1214 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 05:40 PM
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Whaaa I don't know how people afford horses~ I'm so jealous ;-;

It's raining here, been raining for a few days now... mowing the lawn will be a nightmare by the time it gets sunny again XD At least I have my three kitties to snuggle with when the rain gets to me :3

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post #1215 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 05:44 PM
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Beautiful here

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post #1216 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 06:29 PM
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Crys- I'd volunteer to beta read it for you, but I'm swamped with finals, and I wouldn't be able to get it done until early next week or so. :S


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post #1217 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 06:31 PM
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Sorry, what's beta read?

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post #1218 of 4181 (permalink) Old 06-19-2011, 06:32 PM
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That's fine. I'm prolly not going to have too many people look at it for a few chappies at least. Basically, it's having someone read it before you put it out (usually on a website), and the person corrects any errors + gives adivce.

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fishman- To kind of proof-read it for errors, give constructive criticism, etc.

And Crys- send it to me whenever you like :P


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oh, ok. That's what I thought.

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