That's fine. I'm prolly not going to have too many people look at it for a few chappies at least. Basically, it's having someone read it before you put it out (usually on a website), and the person corrects any errors + gives adivce.
Ezekiel - Butterfly DT Male
Schnappi - Blue & Green HMPK Male
Midnight - Forest Green & Blue HM Male
Yuki-Onna - Blue & Clear CT Female
Powder - White & Clear DeT Male
"Why did they search for a new singer? Marco and Tuomas could duet and if they needed the female touch Empu could wear a dress or something." - Random youtuber, on Nightwish.