Oh, I didn't even let my parents see it XD I mean, the prose itself was okay, nothing too incredible, but the story itself... and the reviewers weren't helpful. They were either just general encouragement ones (which I did appreciate, but they didn't help me beyond making me write more of that monstrosity) or ones whining about how they didn't like a book series I had mentioned and generally being rude. Oh, and one from a real-life friend I still am close to :)
Ezekiel - Butterfly DT Male
Schnappi - Blue & Green HMPK Male
Midnight - Forest Green & Blue HM Male
Yuki-Onna - Blue & Clear CT Female
Powder - White & Clear DeT Male
"Why did they search for a new singer? Marco and Tuomas could duet and if they needed the female touch Empu could wear a dress or something." - Random youtuber, on Nightwish.