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post #1 of 7 (permalink) Old 04-23-2011, 11:35 PM Thread Starter
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Talking Poem I wrote!

Hey people!!!!! Ok so i was feeling very creative and wanted to try luck in making a short and slightly creepy poem that told a once again short and slightly creepy story! (maybe i will turn it into a song?? :D)

So enjoy!

Curse of the Delete Button

Innocence, collided with insanity one day,
she set foot in the forbidden forest hey!
She soon would find that she just might or may,
In this world that she created...she would stay!

Innocence she was surely once free,
filled with joy, happiness and glee,
she freely created files,
she loved them but after a while,

She would soon find,
her love would grow blind,
so the files she decided to leave,
so then she pressed 'delete'!

they soon grew enraged,
so they 'deleted' her as revenge for her antics,
locked her in their cage,
...and forever chanted

This is electro world, nothing here you see is real!
You can frolic, laugh and play,
for here with us forever you'll stay!

So forever in Recycle Bin
did she play within.


Thank you thank you! (Keep in mind these are not files like word or whatever i dont know i was thinking she made software files because she was lonely and she wanted to create them to be like imaginary friends to her or something.)

And if you think it is really weird....well i do too lol.

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I like it!
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Thank you everyone! Im glad that people besides myself can enjoy my art. :)

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It's really great! I wish I could write stuff like this! You should sooo turn it into a song! Its awesome!

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I've been working on a melody actually! :)

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