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post #21 of 41 (permalink) Old 05-20-2012, 06:25 PM
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Really great! I'll be keeping an eye out for the next gret chapter! ;)

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Lol thanks, I have to say a MASSIVE thank you to sena for letting me base this on her boy Maine!!!R.I.P!!!I was going to do a seperate one for shiloh, but he is crucial to the storyline!!!Depending on how this one goes I may do another one!!!

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One thing though, Shiloh came to me maimed :p his face was gashed up, as he had been thrown in with cichlids or gouramis. his fins were a mess too hence why he only half flared.. but pretty good though :p

Breed for the breed, not for the money; the words any REAL breeder would understand.

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Lol OOPS!!!I'll have to remember to include about that!!!

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Chapter four: Little Madame

Little Madame


Hmmm I had it all, I lost it all, I found it again and then I get lumped with "Prince Shiloh" pfffffffffff.

It's worth it though, I would put up with a million of him if it meant I could spend all day with my darling madame!
But of course-She is NOT "my" darling madame, she isn't anyone's!!!Or that is what she says anyway...

Shiloh of course
still warns me off her at every given oppurtunity!Why shouldn't he?She's gorgeous!!!I wish she felt about me the same way
I feel about her...


Ahhh just look at her...beautiful-I wish that Maine-iac would get outta the way!!!"Hey dude, do you practice being fat or
does it come naturally?"
"You're only saying that because you can't see "your girl" haha"
"I AM NOT HIS GIRL!!!Jeez you two need to get over yourselves!!!"


Hmmm I'm not his girl...but I would gladly be Maine's, oh I wish he liked me!Hmmm...I wish Shiloh's fins would heal up!I
cant help feeling sorry for him!!!I tried to stop them putting him in with the gouramis, but they didn't listen!!!
They didn't
know any better, they thought he was lonely in his cup and needed some buddies!Just a shame they put him in with the
one thing that would tear him to peices!!!
He didn't help himself attempting to flare at my maine though...
UGHH NOW I'M
DOING IT!!!

2 weeks of living with 2 warring boys and this is what I've been reduced to!!!
It's not surprising, they're not paticularly stimulating conversation...as soon as one of them starts a converation with me
the other completely flips out and starts a war of words!!!

I HATE it!!!Maine always comes of worst too, I wish he would
just leave it, all he ends up doing is spurring Shiloh on to annoy him more!!!I do love shiloh, but ONLY as a brother!!!

This is infuriating, I'm not sure I can do this much longer!!!

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Chapter 5 will be up tomorrow, probably early afternoon!!!Maybe tonight if I'm in a good mood!!!

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WARNING:PREVIEW-The Maine Man Chapter 5: Tremors and Flashbacks

Preview:chapter 5!!!

*pop* *splash* *plop*
AAAAAAAARGH NO PLEASE NOOOOOOO!!!

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omg i soo mad that it had to stop now >-< am like "WHYYY!?!?!" XD

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Breed for the breed, not for the money; the words any REAL breeder would understand.

You must know nothing in order to know all, for all is nothing and nothing is for all.
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your an awesome writer! Love this story...so cute yet told from the bettas point of view..so creative!

Thanks for sharing.. can't see whats next!!

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