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post #1 of 18 (permalink) Old 06-08-2012, 01:54 AM Thread Starter
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A stupid little betta poem :P

Taz the betta was blue
He didnít know what to do
So he started to flare
and ate a hair
Now his life is complete

Open your eyes
Now is the time
To rise up
With darkness we'll still shine
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post #2 of 18 (permalink) Old 06-08-2012, 10:54 AM
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Lolz, love this poem

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Lol Very cute!
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not a poem, a limerick :P nice one btw
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He ate a hair so i had to write something lol

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Lol that is odd.
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I think the 2nd to last line has 1 too few sylables, try and then ate a hair? im not ure...
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I don't know, i was high when writing it. >.>

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lol :)
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cuute

i have 9 bettas together, i dog named sunny, a few tetras, and a pond out my back door
god made fish to be rainbows under the water
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