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post #11 of 45 (permalink) Old 07-30-2010, 12:26 PM
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That was beautiful, yet sad. Like the other people said, i was touched...

Hmm, well I have a lot of fish...
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post #12 of 45 (permalink) Old 07-30-2010, 02:36 PM Thread Starter
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post #13 of 45 (permalink) Old 07-30-2010, 02:46 PM
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This was such an interesting idea for a story. It should be read to children during their Library period, IMO.

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I waited nicely and spread my fins and pretended to look happy. I was told by the little shark that I was pretty when I did that, so I did, even though the water burned.
I found this to be the saddest part.
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post #14 of 45 (permalink) Old 07-31-2010, 04:06 PM
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A+ Story!!!!!

Bettas, Bettas, BETTAS!!!
Enjoy them, while they last...

<<<MY BETTAS!>>>
Cookie --- Orange VT!!!
<<My DEAD Bettas>>
Kirby --- Purple VT!!!
O_O... --- White/Opaque VT!!!
Coconut --- Blue-ish, Red-ish VT!!!
BlueSpash --- Blue, with a hint of turquoise, red, and purple! (VT)
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post #15 of 45 (permalink) Old 08-01-2010, 07:34 PM Thread Starter
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Thanks guys im glad youre all moved by it :)
really i didnt think it was that good
im thinking about writing another, maybe a little less sad though :P

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post #16 of 45 (permalink) Old 08-01-2010, 09:14 PM
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You need to do more! It was soo good!

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I just wrote one... I love it!
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post #18 of 45 (permalink) Old 08-02-2010, 06:47 PM
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Very nice story!
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post #19 of 45 (permalink) Old 08-02-2010, 08:12 PM
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It made me cry :'(

eheehahehhaehehaheheahehaheheah..
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post #20 of 45 (permalink) Old 08-04-2010, 10:58 AM
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Very nice story!, but it was also very sad.

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