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post #101 of 116 (permalink) Old 09-05-2010, 08:20 PM Thread Starter
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Chapter 6:
Deafening Silences
(Rogers POV still!)

The fry were swimming around and rose was removed from the tank yesterday. I couldn't believe what a pathetic excuse of a father i was and as i picked one fry up and put him in the nest since he was the last one that couldnt swim i told him softly "im sorry."

I was removed from the tank and put in my part of the other tank. And i knew exactly what was coming... " So the plan worked! A little late but still! Thank you so much Roger!" I could barely bring myself to speak but i knew there was much to be said. I told him everything and he just stared at me in disbelief. Days went by. Silence,hate, and disgust posioned the water i called home. The sun seemed like a black hole that tortured me by not sucking me inside. By not helping me escape this ear splitting silence. I just wanted to swim to Thailand forget about all of this and make everything right. I wanted to turn invisible. I want to just dissapear so no one could see me. So all of these eyes would stop looking at my like i was one of their own bodily exretions. I just hoped everyone would forgive me and that the water would be cleansed of the poison i had created.....

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THIS IS AMAZING!! I LOVE IT!! I CANT WAIT TIL I READ MORE!!

Also i finally got to doing Marki's adventure!!

you can read it now, if you want to, or have the time to.

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Ahhh!! This is SO GOOD!!! I'm addicted to this story!

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Chapter 7
True Friendship
(phantom's pov)

How could he do this....he told me he did it so he wouldn't dissapoint her but... no, he really was sorry... she did love me again.....maybe he wasn't so bad but still.After hours of repeating these thoughts in my head over and over i decided it was time to forgive him. I swam up to the divider and said jokingly, "Hey butt face! It's ok, i thought it over and i forgive you." he came out of his cave and said, "It really is?" "Yeah, this silence is really starting to bug me. I understand where you were coming from and so it's ok." He immediatley lit up when i said those words. "THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

It had been about 9 months later and the fry were all grown up. They might not have been mine but i still felt a little proud. And they all loved me as much as their real parents. Seeing them be taken out of the tank and being taken somewhere else nearly broke our hearts but when you really love someone (or more than one someone shall we say) you need to let them go.

Years and years had passed and i had grown old. Roger and rose had went to sleep about a year ago and new bettas were in the other parts of my tank. I finally understood what life was all about, you had to balance work and play, failing and succeeding... survival and living. The lights in my tank were turned off for the last time and i then went to sleep, sharing my sweet dreams with rose and roger.


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Wow thats an amazing story.. sucks its over. :((

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??Aww:( When you said went to sleep did they die:(??

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Aw. It's over. That's sad for me!!! :o

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Aw... You didn't explain the years??? That was short...

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VERY nice story!!! Did Rose and Roger die??

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they all died in the end. sorry so short i just got lazy. :p I might be working on another story too in the lounge! It will be a vampire knight fanfic if i do it! By the way if you don't know what vampire knight it go on dubhappy.com and search vampire knight episode 1! YOU WILL GET ADDICTED I TELL YOU!

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