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post #21 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-01-2010, 09:42 PM Thread Starter
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Thank you

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Fez - Metallic OHM
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Sorrority tank - 1 Det - 3 CT's
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post #22 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-01-2010, 10:48 PM
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Hi there,

I thought your story was very good so far. It really makes you feel sorry for some of these fish. A lot of people think that because fish can't scream they have no feelings.
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post #23 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-01-2010, 11:03 PM Thread Starter
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Thank you I feel the same way.I know if Pirate had had better care taken of him he would have lived longer then he did I had him for just under a year beofre he died.

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Fez - Metallic OHM
Tomato - HM
Thor - HMPK King
Sorrority tank - 1 Det - 3 CT's
Goldfish Tank - 1 Orange Oranda - 1 Calico Fantail - 1 Clown Pleco - 1 Dojo Loach

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post #25 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-03-2010, 11:10 PM Thread Starter
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I will soon the last part is the hardest part to write since it has to come from his point of veiw and he was very sick before he died it's sad so it is making it a little harder to write.

Dobby - HM
Absolem - DeT
Fez - Metallic OHM
Tomato - HM
Thor - HMPK King
Sorrority tank - 1 Det - 3 CT's
Goldfish Tank - 1 Orange Oranda - 1 Calico Fantail - 1 Clown Pleco - 1 Dojo Loach

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post #26 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-04-2010, 12:34 AM
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great story so sorry that he died:(

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post #27 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-05-2010, 02:49 AM Thread Starter
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Thanks he was a good fish I probably could have helped him with what I know now and he would still be alive,but back then I tried really hard just did not know as much.

Dobby - HM
Absolem - DeT
Fez - Metallic OHM
Tomato - HM
Thor - HMPK King
Sorrority tank - 1 Det - 3 CT's
Goldfish Tank - 1 Orange Oranda - 1 Calico Fantail - 1 Clown Pleco - 1 Dojo Loach

R.I.P my original three
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post #28 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-26-2010, 05:42 PM
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Awww sweet story! I'm eager to read the ending. Sorry the ending will be sad, I'm sorry he died :( but his story is wonderful. At least he died happy and loved and not all alone suffering without ever knowing what a good life was like. You saved him from a bad life like so many have had to endure like the other "Top Shelf" fish did if they were not ever rescued. Great job on your story and great job as his Mom :)

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post #29 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-27-2010, 06:27 PM
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Can't wait for the end. (:

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post #30 of 38 (permalink) Old 09-27-2010, 07:18 PM Thread Starter
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Thanks I recently got a job so I don't have alot of time but I will see if I can write an ending.

Dobby - HM
Absolem - DeT
Fez - Metallic OHM
Tomato - HM
Thor - HMPK King
Sorrority tank - 1 Det - 3 CT's
Goldfish Tank - 1 Orange Oranda - 1 Calico Fantail - 1 Clown Pleco - 1 Dojo Loach

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