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post #1 of 19 (permalink) Old 12-18-2010, 02:53 AM Thread Starter
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Talking Haikus Anyone?

Not exactly betta art, but you could write one about bettas if you wanted to!

I want to learn how to write haikus, I think it would be a wonderful way to relieve stress and vent some emotions. Then I got a great idea- what if this forum had a thread where everyone could write and share their haikus together? I love poetry and I would enjoy reading everyone else's poems as well!

I found this awesome link that has all different types of haiku writing techniques, so I'll post it here so that anyone else is interested in writing haikus can learn along with me! http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiartjr.htm

Umm, my first haiku, any and all suggestions are welcome!

snowflakes fall
the wind blows cold
a bitter taste


Now let me see some of your haikus!

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AWWW! I love your all's betta haikus!! I need a to write a betta haiku now! XD

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bwhahah i LOVE this thread. <3

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