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post #11 of 38 (permalink) Old 02-25-2011, 08:58 PM
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Awesome! Lots of this looks like it was based on real events! Bravo!

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post #12 of 38 (permalink) Old 02-25-2011, 09:13 PM Thread Starter
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Some of it was! Most of it though, I based on TV programs and articles. The breeder though, that was entirely made up... thanks! I'm glad you liked it, this was one of my favorite pieces I ever wrote. :)

Sherlock Holmes - Male VT Lance Sweets - Male HM
Mirage - Male DBT Rocky - Male HMPK red copper
Daisy - Female HM Moonlight - Male HMDBT
Captain - baby betta
Gryffindor - very sick rescue HMDBTPK
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post #13 of 38 (permalink) Old 02-26-2011, 02:04 AM Thread Starter
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Awww, no one else likes my story? :(

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It's great! Is there more?

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Yay, someone else read it! :) Erm, at the moment no, there isn't any more... But I could totally add more if you want! Tell me what sort of thing you want to happen, and I'll spin something brilliant up. Hopefully. ;)

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That was awesome,Good job.

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Yay, thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it! I like the blue betta in your avatar, he's pretty! :D

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Daisy - Female HM Moonlight - Male HMDBT
Captain - baby betta
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:O such a great story XD i wished i was a great owner like the owner in the story and her brother XD

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1 Bettas:
1 male red veiltail- Ruby

R.I.P :(
1 male red veiltail- Little Red
1 female cambodian veiltail- Artemis
1 male bright blue veiltail- Hephaestus
1 male cambodian veiltail- Apollo
1 male turquoise veiltail- Dionysus
1 male over-halfmoon- Moonstone
1 male delta tail- Poseidon

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You will be someday! And I based some of the story on me... shhh, I know authors aren't supposed to do dat! But I only wrote it for fun. :)

Sherlock Holmes - Male VT Lance Sweets - Male HM
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Daisy - Female HM Moonlight - Male HMDBT
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ha, LOL, authors can do that, autobios XD im so bored right now, usually i would be staring at my betta, now its fallin asleep XD

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1 Bettas:
1 male red veiltail- Ruby

R.I.P :(
1 male red veiltail- Little Red
1 female cambodian veiltail- Artemis
1 male bright blue veiltail- Hephaestus
1 male cambodian veiltail- Apollo
1 male turquoise veiltail- Dionysus
1 male over-halfmoon- Moonstone
1 male delta tail- Poseidon

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