Sparky; A Pet Store betta - Betta Fish and Betta Fish Care
Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
post #1 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 06:53 PM Thread Starter
Member
 
bettaloverforever16's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Minesota USA
Posts: 499
Sparky; A Pet Store betta

Chapter 1: Hope after all
I felt cold water surge around my body as I was dumped in a plastic cup of doom. I charged the side of the cup. Over, over, and over........ "It's not going to work you know" I jumped, and turned around. A beautiful red halfmoon femal was looking at me, she said, "My name's Sasha. Your's?" I could just stare, she was so beautiful. I finally was able to say, "The name's Runner" Sasha stared at me, I twisted around to see what i looked like. I was a red crowntail with a blue wash. She suddenly blurted out, "Humans!!! Pick me!!" I started flaring as I saw two humans, a big male, and a little girl. The male picked me up, and said, "he looks healthy" I flared, hoping they would also pick Sasha. The little girl picked up Sasha, "Can we get her too?" The man nodded, he picked up all the supplies we needed, a nd walked to the front counter.
bettaloverforever16 is offline  
Sponsored Links
Advertisement
 
post #2 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 06:54 PM Thread Starter
Member
 
bettaloverforever16's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Minesota USA
Posts: 499
I know, its terrible.
bettaloverforever16 is offline  
post #3 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 07:41 PM
Member
 
Johnificent's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Posts: 655
its not terrible :) just write chapter 2. then, we can see wat really happens

My Pets :D

1 Bettas:
1 male red veiltail- Ruby

R.I.P :(
1 male red veiltail- Little Red
1 female cambodian veiltail- Artemis
1 male bright blue veiltail- Hephaestus
1 male cambodian veiltail- Apollo
1 male turquoise veiltail- Dionysus
1 male over-halfmoon- Moonstone
1 male delta tail- Poseidon

Moonstone's Video :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FREHf5GqPYc

http://www.bettafish.com/members/17055-johnificent.html
Johnificent is offline  
post #4 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 08:26 PM
New Member
 
B3TTA LUVA's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Texas, Ye-Haw!!!!
Posts: 104
Definatly not horrible:) write some more I just love "love" intrests!!

~*`~*`~Please don't make me angry...trust me you don't want to open up this can of Red-Headed fury.~*`~*`~
Love my little Jaz!!! <3 (Jasper)
B3TTA LUVA is offline  
post #5 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 08:37 PM
Member
 
baylee767's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Hawaii- Go Diamond head!
Posts: 1,565
More please!

If guppies are jewels, than Bettas must be rainbows

Proud owner of Neon, Ryu, and a still unnamed CT
baylee767 is offline  
post #6 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 08:56 PM
New Member
 
B3TTA LUVA's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Texas, Ye-Haw!!!!
Posts: 104
More please!!

~*`~*`~Please don't make me angry...trust me you don't want to open up this can of Red-Headed fury.~*`~*`~
Love my little Jaz!!! <3 (Jasper)
B3TTA LUVA is offline  
post #7 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 08:58 PM Thread Starter
Member
 
bettaloverforever16's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Minesota USA
Posts: 499
Chapter 2: Diaster Strikes

I struggled in the bag, cold air suddenly filled it as the bag was opened. We were both dumped into the same tank, filflthy water, cold water. We both shivered, afraid to even move. Someone spilled food into our tank, we ran to eat it. Sasha looked at me, her face fell, "I know what they want" I looked at her, "What?" She looked at me with a sad face, "They know nothing about bettas, they just want us to breed. Well I'm not doing it, we can be rebels together." i nodded, "Agreed" So we both just swam around, the humans looked at us angrily. Suddenly the man punched the tank ut of anger, we yelled, air was all around us. We flopped around, thankfully the girl shrieked as put us in some water. I knew right then that little girl cared for us. The way she looekd at us, and saved our lives. But we could only hope she could save our lives once more, because the man was coming at us angrily.
bettaloverforever16 is offline  
post #8 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 09:13 PM
Member
 
Johnificent's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Posts: 655
:O wow, i definitely need to see wat happens next.. so much suspense!

My Pets :D

1 Bettas:
1 male red veiltail- Ruby

R.I.P :(
1 male red veiltail- Little Red
1 female cambodian veiltail- Artemis
1 male bright blue veiltail- Hephaestus
1 male cambodian veiltail- Apollo
1 male turquoise veiltail- Dionysus
1 male over-halfmoon- Moonstone
1 male delta tail- Poseidon

Moonstone's Video :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FREHf5GqPYc

http://www.bettafish.com/members/17055-johnificent.html
Johnificent is offline  
post #9 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-06-2011, 09:19 PM Thread Starter
Member
 
bettaloverforever16's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Minesota USA
Posts: 499
Thanks!! I have recently been sucked into writing stories, I love writing them. This is my second story, I started another one, but I got bored with it. This one I wont get bored with. So much suspense.
bettaloverforever16 is offline  
post #10 of 25 (permalink) Old 03-07-2011, 07:32 AM
New Member
 
B3TTA LUVA's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Texas, Ye-Haw!!!!
Posts: 104
O.O Mean, mean man!!! Please write somemore!! The suspense it is KILLING me.....

~*`~*`~Please don't make me angry...trust me you don't want to open up this can of Red-Headed fury.~*`~*`~
Love my little Jaz!!! <3 (Jasper)
B3TTA LUVA is offline  
Reply

Quick Reply
Message:
Options

Register Now



In order to be able to post messages on the Betta Fish and Betta Fish Care forums, you must first register.
Please enter your desired user name, your email address and other required details in the form below.

User Name:
Password
Please enter a password for your user account. Note that passwords are case-sensitive.

Password:


Confirm Password:
Email Address
Please enter a valid email address for yourself.

Email Address:
OR

Log-in









Human Verification

In order to verify that you are a human and not a spam bot, please enter the answer into the following box below based on the instructions contained in the graphic.



Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Show Printable Version
Email this Page Email this Page



Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
My betta, Sparky f937r Betta Chat 4 03-27-2010 12:28 PM

Posting Rules  
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

 
Powered by vBadvanced CMPS v3.2.3
For the best viewing experience please update your browser to Google Chrome