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post #1 of 8 (permalink) Old 06-25-2011, 03:29 PM Thread Starter
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Hi, I'm trying to make a betta story, here is the first part...
BTW my teacher says I'm an excellent writer, is it true~?




The Beautiful Betta
A Story
By Emma Dahl



Isn't He Beautiful? A kind voice cooed. Another voice came, strong, but kind. "Yes our son is very beautiful indeed!"
these voices came from my two parents, Trinity and Dagger.
i was only a small fry, but i got to stay with my parents, for i was a late hatch, but i was one of the 20 who survived the spawning, most of my brothers and sisters died before i was brung into the world.

what do you think, should i continue?

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post #2 of 8 (permalink) Old 06-25-2011, 05:27 PM
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It's good... Brought not Brung

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post #3 of 8 (permalink) Old 06-26-2011, 09:43 PM Thread Starter
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sorry, i forgot the word that would replace it :P but i'm wondering if i should continue

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post #4 of 8 (permalink) Old 06-26-2011, 09:48 PM
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Yes, definitely continue! :D

Don't forget to capitalize your I's and put quotation marks around what everyone's saying. :P

(Please ignore my inner grammar nerd. XD)


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post #5 of 8 (permalink) Old 07-01-2011, 05:09 PM
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I'd say finish up learning grammar and spelling first, then continue. :0 It makes it easier to organize your thoughts and easier for other people to read it.
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I know proper grammar, but I'm still only 10! remember??? XD

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post #7 of 8 (permalink) Old 07-12-2011, 12:40 PM Thread Starter
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anyway, sorry I couldn't write, so much vacations~! O.O

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That's okay :) But if you enjoy writing, grammar is an essential part. It's not hard, though. Very easy to learn! :)


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