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A scream nearby woke me up, my blood ran ice cold. What was that scream? I suddenly understood, and looked up. A cat's face was above us, it's paw reaching towards the water. Toward's me.............

(I know it's short right now, but I wanted it to end in a cliff-hanger. Will right more tonight if you guys want me to continue :3)
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Instnct came over me, I started darting around the tank, confusing the cat. For the first time I could actually see my fins, I was an orange dalmation, as far as I was concerned there was only one more of this in this tank. She was a female. I darted into a cave, where several other fry were hiding. The shadow over the tank disapeared, along with my fear. I swam happily out, stretching my fins proudly. But now a net appeared over us, and started scooping up fry. Only two were left, me and the orange dalamtion. But she now was floating in a cup, and I thought, "Breeding?! We're much too young, and we're related!" Another big shadow appeared us, and started banging on the tank, and yet again I thought, "This can't be happening.........."

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Please, continue with your story. The suspense is killing me!
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(Lol, thanks guys)

After about a night with her in the cup, she got released. For awhile we just sat there, staring at eachother. I suddenly had the urge to attack her, I mean WHY could she even want to this?! I flared at her, warning her to stay back. But she just sat there, flaring her little fins at me. Suddenly I lunged forward, tearing at her fins and head. Then something banged on the tank, a shadow loomed above me. Not noticing, I continued attacking the female. There was no hiding spots in this tank, so there was nowhere for her to go. Her fins were shreds now, her body now red. A net came and pulled me out o the tank, dumping me into a small, cold tank. My fins clamped, I became dizzy. This, I guess, was my punishment for attackong her. But I guess I didn't care. Then I saw a human standing nearby, smirking slightly, as he watched me suffer......................
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! WTH? c'mon! STOP WITH THE CLIFF HANGERS! I WANT TO READ MORE

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Yes write more MORE!! I love it!

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I narrowed my eyes, and swam tightly in circles, tryig to keep my blood running. Soon it got tiring, but I knew if I stopped I was going to die, so go on I did. Circle, circle, circle........ This pattern went on for hours, when I finally collasped from exhaustion, who knows how long later I woke up in a large heated tank. What the heck? It didn't seem like the old person's house, so I assumed I had gotten sold, apparently for a lot of money I would soon learn later on. It was a miracle that my fins were still perfect after what I went through. "Here fishie fish....." Came a sweet voice, a girl had walked into the room. She had meduim long blonde hair and blue eyes. Smiling, she said, "My name's Tanna, you're new name is Spot.........."
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