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post #31 of 136 (permalink) Old 07-13-2011, 03:02 PM
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Write more NOW or my minions will attack you.



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post #32 of 136 (permalink) Old 07-13-2011, 04:00 PM Thread Starter
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lol I cant write right now
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Dude, keep writing, or the bettas will eat you!

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Write more NOW or my minions will attack you.



Go Minions!
Um, did you train your minions? Cause their kinda um...just bouncing? LOL



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Sorry I haven't been writing, been really busy later. Will tomorrow night for sure!
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post #36 of 136 (permalink) Old 07-15-2011, 12:56 AM
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I really like it but I suggest working on your sentance structure just a little. I think it would be awesome for you to write a few short stories, not so many cliff hangers, idk about everyone else but I get rather impatient haha

I love the uniqueness and variety of each fish :)

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Yes. They will bounce you into writing.

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come on please do more just a little
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I really like it but I suggest working on your sentance structure just a little. I think it would be awesome for you to write a few short stories, not so many cliff hangers, idk about everyone else but I get rather impatient haha
what do you mean its perfect
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Thanks Betta Dude :)

Going to friend's house, will write more as soon as I get home.
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