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post #1 of 5 (permalink) Old 07-26-2011, 03:18 AM Thread Starter
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Betta Hauki

I like writing stories and poems so I gave it a shot. By the way I know bettas don't live in the oceans, but it worked well.

Bettas of Deep Blue Seas
Jewels to everyone, young, old, and small
Swimming into our hearts forever


I would really like some criticsimism on this (Sorry for bad spelling) I would be suprised if there was none. Thanks!!

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post #2 of 5 (permalink) Old 07-31-2011, 06:07 PM
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I like it! Very nice poem.
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Thanks DQ!
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Very awesome! I really want to hear the rest.
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It's a poem, that's all their is. But thanks for your compliment!
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