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post #1 of 5 (permalink) Old 08-03-2011, 08:30 AM Thread Starter
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Betta poem I wrote...

Wrote this last night. I named it "Little Life" not realizing there was already a poem on here named that but, oh well. Hope you like it .

“Little Life”
You sit in a little bowl, a little life, a little soul
Every day you watch and wait for a wish come true, a twist of fate
You tell yourself to just hold on, your day will come it won’t be long
Then one day someone picks you up, your little life, in your little cup
You wiggle and dance all over the place, an answered prayer, your saving grace
Now you’re in a nice new home, plants, clean water, and room to roam
So little one swim and be free for your little life will be spent with me
A little soul, a little heart, a brand new day a brand new start

I expect to pass through this world but once; any good thing therefore that I can do, or any kindness that I can show to any fellow creature, let me do it now; let me not defer or neglect it, for I shall not pass this way again.
~Ettiene De Grellet ~




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"Bump" Anyone like it?

I expect to pass through this world but once; any good thing therefore that I can do, or any kindness that I can show to any fellow creature, let me do it now; let me not defer or neglect it, for I shall not pass this way again.
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I luv it!
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Nice poem!
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I love it! Well done. I especially like the last line <3

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