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post #11 of 23 (permalink) Old 11-21-2011, 09:55 PM Thread Starter
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lol aw thanks :) & I want to write more but I need some good topics lol & the stories on here need to be published mine was okay :) lol but thanks so much for the feedback & support<3
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i typed what I said twice -___- haha.
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This was such a sweet story. I was so enthralled in reading it I almost burned my dinner. Lol. But really, I like it a lot. <3

Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid. - Albert Einstein
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thanks so much all of you :) I think i'm gonna make a new one later this week, but a whole different view and what not I'm so glad you guys enjoyed it ^__^ mission accomplished <3
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I understand how you feel! It's hard to keep writing and have some really good things to add in and talk about.

Well I am writing something too (Its called "Marki's Adventure) Im on chapter 3 if you havent read it already, your welcome to. Just click the link in my signature:) Great Story!

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OMG :D I love your story & thanks for advice :) I read the stories on here and they give me a lot of inspiration so I want to type more and hopefully I get just as much feedback like you because your story is really good :)
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OMG :D I love your story & thanks for advice :) I read the stories on here and they give me a lot of inspiration so I want to type more and hopefully I get just as much feedback like you because your story is really good :)
Oh, thanks! I like your story. It starts off like a tragedy and ends very nice! At first when i read the first part of your story, i was thinking, what is this guy doing, why is it so sad. But It was yet to come to a positive climax. And when i read the part of when he threw him in a bag on the sidewalk, i was in horror lol. Very nice suspension.

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Lol I know, my english teacher always loved the stories I wrote but I always was given a topic so I guess when I had a chance to write my own, I just put my mind to it and I knew the sad part that it would grab readers attentions and the ending would warm their hearts :)
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I definitely felt that when i read your story! I understand what you mean because i was always told that i should write a book and that im a good writer by my teacher and some poeple who read my stories, but yeah i was also always given a topic so i couldnt really stretch my ideas and creativeness.

Also my favorite topic was to write my own story when i was in 4-5 grade.

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really? that's so cool :D & omg you too? I swear after 5th & 4th grade the topics given to me, were so boring -__- lol!
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