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post #41 of 128 (permalink) Old 03-22-2013, 10:51 PM
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This is the flier I came up with,let me know what you think.

Pennsylvania Betta Association
A new and upcoming Betta association looking for Betta owners and breeders to join.
We will be split into 4 chapters:
The NW Chapter
The SW Chapter
The NE Chapter
The SE Chapter
Hoping to get enough members to be sanctioned by the International Betta Congress.
Interested in learning more!
Contact: my email
Check out our FaceBook page:
Pennsylvania Betta Association

I will insert a couple of Betta Pictures.
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post #42 of 128 (permalink) Old 03-22-2013, 11:09 PM Thread Starter
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very nice
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post #43 of 128 (permalink) Old 03-22-2013, 11:11 PM
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Maybe substitute the word "hoping" with something more decisive, and leaving out "enough"? Like seeking or looking or whatever? Also, "Betta association" seems a little redundant following "Pennsylvania Betta Association" and with "Betta owners and etc." coming after it.

When you mention the chapters, maybe phrase it so that the four chapters are pre-existing or something - it lacks the same decisiveness of the word "hoping" and whatnot.

Maybe someone with more marketing/advertising experience can weigh in?

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Association changed to: Betta Club(not the name,the 2nd one).

Dropped the Chapters and used this:
The club will be split into 4 chapters statewide.

Changed the IBC part to:

When we have enough members we will look into getting sanctioned by the International Betta Congress.
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The language reads as a lot more stable now, while still conveying that it's an up and coming group that still needs members to function!

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Cool,thanks for your input!!
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nothing here in Hershey

Hello there, the angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack & Sally if we want
Where you can always find me
We'll have Halloween on Christmas
And in the night we'll wish this never ends
We'll wish this never ends.

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If you want,see about putting out some fliers.
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post #49 of 128 (permalink) Old 03-23-2013, 03:56 PM
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Hershey? You would be in my section of the chapter

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post #50 of 128 (permalink) Old 03-23-2013, 04:02 PM
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No,I am in the NW,by Pittsburgh.
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