Im a beginner so I can only catch the basics in a fish.. The first male has very rounded edges. Lots of red wash which is a fault.. His fins should have a cleaner edge to them. Uneven branching,
I know little to nothing about overall HMPK standards but I do know about reds.. His color is very clean and even but He has LOTS of iridescence which is a color fault, His dorsal should ideally be more upright.. The anal fin should also slope more towards the base replicating a trapezoid shape appearance..His dorsal should also be more rounded.. His Caudal edges should be just a bit more sharper aswell.. his anal also looks "kinked"