Hi, I'm trying to make a betta story, here is the first part...
BTW my teacher says I'm an excellent writer, is it true~?
The Beautiful Betta
By Emma Dahl
Isn't He Beautiful? A kind voice cooed. Another voice came, strong, but kind. "Yes our son is very beautiful indeed!"
these voices came from my two parents, Trinity and Dagger.
i was only a small fry, but i got to stay with my parents, for i was a late hatch, but i was one of the 20 who survived the spawning, most of my brothers and sisters died before i was brung into the world.
what do you think, should i continue?