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Old 05-23-2012, 08:31 PM   #31 
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Cute. It is a little hard to tell who's speaking at which time.
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Old 05-23-2012, 08:53 PM   #32 
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i agree with BL2000
but it is very interesting and so suspensful XP
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Old 05-24-2012, 05:28 AM   #33 
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I can add in names in brackets if people want!
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Old 05-24-2012, 09:53 AM   #34 
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that might work
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Old 05-24-2012, 12:28 PM   #35 
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Chapter 5: The Maine Man-Tremors and Flashbacks!

Tremors and Flashbacks!!!


(Shiloh)*pop* *splash* *plop*
AAAAAAAARGH NO PLEASE NOOOOOOO!!!
(Maine)"SHILOH!!!Whats up dude?!"
(Shiloh)"Ohhh Maine...Sorry, didn't mean to wake you"

I watch him turn round before I let my mind wonder back to the dream I had been
having...Urrrgh it was awful!I was back with the gouramis in the community tank...I got
in their way so they nipped at my beautiful tail-said I would learn that I shouldn't get in
their way, and if I did it again they would do worse than just nip my tail!

Oh I wish I
hadn't sulked so much when my human picked Maine over me...Then they wouldn't have
thought I was lonely, and put me in that horrid tank!!!
But it's ok!I never have to go back there again!!!
Pfff some comfort that is, if Maine didn't
get picked over me I wouldn't have been in there in the first place!

I know it isn't his fault but I can't help being resentful to him...I wish we could start over,
but some things just can't be unsaid!
I should never have called him a finshowfreakshow!!!

Hang on what on earth is he saying?
(Maine) selfish...unreliable...self-centred...self-absorbed...Know-It-All!!!

(Shiloh)
WOAH...ITS ON!!!I HATE HIM SOOOO MUCH!SO RUDE!!!
GRRRRRR I'm gonna kick some fin!!!
"YO finshowfreakshow-look at yourself as the world sees you!!!"*Parades around
showing fins off in a crude impression of Maine* "Look at me, my name is
maineywainey, but I prefer to be called finshowfreakshow, I loooove madame sooo much
but she doesn't love me!"

(Maine)
"SHUT UP MAN!!!SHE'S GONNA HEAR YOU!SHHHHHH!!!PLEASE SHILOH I'M
BEGGING YOU!!!"
(Shiloh)
"Whats wrong Maineywainey?scared of the truth coming out?awww adorable isn't
it...PASS ME THE SICK BUCKET!!!"

(Madame)
"What did he just say Maine?"
(Maine)
"Oh nothing, he said nothing"
(Madame)
"HE SAID SOMETHING NOW YOU TELL ME WHAT HE SAID RIGHT NOW!"

(Maine)
"OK OK...he said...he said I love you..."
(Madame)
"You do?Thats...

(Maine)
"I know-you think I'm horrible, and ugly and..."
(Madame)
"Will you PLEASE let me finish!What I was about to say is...I love you too!!!"

(Shiloh)
"YOU WHAT?!WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?YOU BETTER HOPE MADAME DIDN'T
SAY WHAT I THINK SHE JUST SAID YOU MAINE-IAC!"

(Madame to Shiloh)
YES I DID JUST SAY I LOVE MAINE!!!There is nothing you can do about it, I'm not
YOUR girl!!!

(Maine)
OHHHHH...ohhhh...ahhhh...ohhh *does dance*
*Madame Dances Back*

*Door Opens*
"WOW you two look friendly!I need cups...and a net...I'M SOOOO HAPPY!I HOPED
THIS WOULD HAPPEN!!!"

10 Minutes later:

(Maine)
"What are we doing in here?And why on earth did she put that leaf on the top of the
water?"
(Madame)
"Don't you see what she wants us to do?"
(Maine)
"OHHHHHHHH!!!well then...better get on with it!"
(Madame)
"Well, thats not exactly the most romantic proposal yet...but it certainly is the most amusing!!!"


Chapter 6 coming soon!
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Old 05-24-2012, 01:34 PM   #36 
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and the fun thing was, Maine was the friendliest male I've bred weird fish.
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Old 05-24-2012, 01:41 PM   #37 
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and the fun thing was, Maine was the friendliest male I've bred weird fish.
Hehe, did I do good so far?
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Old 05-24-2012, 02:48 PM   #38 
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yes? lol
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Old 05-24-2012, 03:09 PM   #39 
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Thanks! :)
Chapter 6 will be up soon!
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Old 05-24-2012, 10:00 PM   #40 
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haha cute story
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