I'm not the expert on form, but from what I can tell, his anal is a bit too long. It should line up with his caudal fin. And any HM should have a crisp, straight line. The edges of the caudal fin are rounded.
And I can't quite tell from the picture... but something seems off about his body shape.
Last edited by Delta; 05-29-2012 at 03:41 PM.