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Old 03-22-2013, 09:51 PM   #41 
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This is the flier I came up with,let me know what you think.

Pennsylvania Betta Association
A new and upcoming Betta association looking for Betta owners and breeders to join.
We will be split into 4 chapters:
The NW Chapter
The SW Chapter
The NE Chapter
The SE Chapter
Hoping to get enough members to be sanctioned by the International Betta Congress.
Interested in learning more!
Contact: my email
Check out our FaceBook page:
Pennsylvania Betta Association

I will insert a couple of Betta Pictures.
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:09 PM   #42 
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very nice
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:11 PM   #43 
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Maybe substitute the word "hoping" with something more decisive, and leaving out "enough"? Like seeking or looking or whatever? Also, "Betta association" seems a little redundant following "Pennsylvania Betta Association" and with "Betta owners and etc." coming after it.

When you mention the chapters, maybe phrase it so that the four chapters are pre-existing or something - it lacks the same decisiveness of the word "hoping" and whatnot.

Maybe someone with more marketing/advertising experience can weigh in?
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:21 PM   #44 
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Association changed to: Betta Club(not the name,the 2nd one).

Dropped the Chapters and used this:
The club will be split into 4 chapters statewide.

Changed the IBC part to:

When we have enough members we will look into getting sanctioned by the International Betta Congress.
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:24 PM   #45 
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The language reads as a lot more stable now, while still conveying that it's an up and coming group that still needs members to function!
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Old 03-22-2013, 10:26 PM   #46 
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Cool,thanks for your input!!
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Old 03-22-2013, 11:13 PM   #47 
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nothing here in Hershey
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Old 03-23-2013, 01:23 PM   #48 
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If you want,see about putting out some fliers.
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Old 03-23-2013, 02:56 PM   #49 
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Hershey? You would be in my section of the chapter
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Old 03-23-2013, 03:02 PM   #50 
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No,I am in the NW,by Pittsburgh.
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