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Old 05-09-2013, 10:56 PM   #1 
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My art

Many of you don't know my other side. I love music, art, writing poems, photography, along with writing stories. I figured I would post some of my works here. Since they are all classified as art lol. Some stuff may have a dark side but with good reason.

You were not there when I needed you,
Left my side when I wanted you,
Pushed me down when I got up,
Ignored my deepest needs,
Didn't care about my wants,
This is the end of us,
Forever we are finished,
Do not come back as you will be rejected,
Apologize as no forgiveness will be given,
Leave me now,
It was what you wanted,
Never come back,
And never say I love you,
Because I know you don't.

Just one example, I am not amazing but I enjoy doing it.
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Old 05-09-2013, 10:59 PM   #2 
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Oh you know. Just dropping buy. Totally not stalking XD.
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Old 05-09-2013, 11:02 PM   #3 
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*sighs heavily* guess I can't possibly have a thread with out you on it! Lol. XD
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Old 05-10-2013, 12:24 AM   #4 
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I think it (the poem) is quite good. The first two lines are my favourite actually. Really love their "flowiness." The ending seems a little sudden, but overall, it's not bad and you definitely got your point across.

Excited to see what else you come up with. Keep it up. :)
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Old 05-10-2013, 12:36 AM   #5 
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Thanks, I try to make my poems flow, but they tend to be a bit, like jumpy, they keep leaping from place to place with out flowing together, something I am working on.
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Old 05-10-2013, 01:00 AM   #6 
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usually flow happens when you're not trying for flow. sounds silly, maybe, but that's how it worked when I used to write lol

I like your writing though!
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Old 05-10-2013, 01:21 AM   #7 
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Thanks! I will post another tomorrow. Or maybe a pic... Something.
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Old 05-15-2013, 02:32 AM   #8 
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Nice poem!
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Old 05-28-2013, 05:24 PM   #9 
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Sorry I haven't posted guys! Went photographing and have some great shots to share with you all over the next couple days. Here is a pic of a huge moth on a fence post we saw today!
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Old 05-28-2013, 05:41 PM   #10 
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Polythemis! We see those guys sometimes if we're lucky at my grandparents place out in the country. They are wonderful! And nice shot btw.
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