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Old 07-25-2013, 01:17 PM   #1 
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My story I am writing.....

Please tell me what you think. The book is still unnamed and I have begun the chapters but will not be posting them until they are completely finished and edited (I am a perfectionist :D)
But here is the story line. If you can think of any food major events and such please let me know.
They main character is Christina.
It all starts when Christina and her best friend Kat go to Wendy's on the last day of grade 11.
These two boys walk in. They look exactly like each other.
Christina sees them and they stand staring at each other not able to look away.
After that encounter Christina gets weird urges to go places and she always ends up running into them.
Finally they tell her she needs to ignore the urges.
Unable to leave the town until they kill a demon that is risking their survival, Christina keeps running into them putting her in mortal danger.
The twins agree to make her come with them so she stays safer.
She falls in love with one of them and they continue to travel together.
When the other twin is captured by humans after having difficulty controlling his temper in public it is up to Christina and her love to save him but will they be too late?
When they become so close to saving him the demon they failed to banish comes back and some big trouble brews for the trio.
Along the way Christina learns there is a world over lapping with the one she calls home. She also learns how evil humans can be.

This a sci-fi and romance novel.
The twins (names are undecided)
Are called Creatures they can half turn into a wolf rare few can fully change into a giant wolf like creature. These are very powerful and few can control their powers.
Both of the twins in this story can fully morph.
Their morphing is not totally controlled and they often accidentally half change when there mood swings.
If you all can help me with names for twins and have any good ideas please help.
By the way the twins will not be named Fred and George!
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Old 07-26-2013, 07:53 AM   #2 
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My brothers are twins, their names are Eric and Gabe.

But I think Logan and Lucas match your characters better.
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Old 07-26-2013, 01:55 PM   #3 
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Thanks but I am leaning towards Luke and Talon as they are my favorite male names what do you think?
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Old 07-26-2013, 02:01 PM   #4 
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I love those names! I actually have a cousin named Lucas (Luke for short), and his dog is named Talon. Weird...
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Old 07-26-2013, 02:42 PM   #5 
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Hahahaha! That's awesome! The characters will be named after your cousin and his dog rofl!
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Old 07-26-2013, 03:16 PM   #6 
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Lol I'll have to tell him the next time I see him :)
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