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Old 07-30-2010, 11:26 AM   #11 
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That was beautiful, yet sad. Like the other people said, i was touched...
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Old 07-30-2010, 01:36 PM   #12 
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Old 07-30-2010, 01:46 PM   #13 
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This was such an interesting idea for a story. It should be read to children during their Library period, IMO.

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I waited nicely and spread my fins and pretended to look happy. I was told by the little shark that I was pretty when I did that, so I did, even though the water burned.
I found this to be the saddest part.
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Old 07-31-2010, 03:06 PM   #14 
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A+ Story!!!!!
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Old 08-01-2010, 06:34 PM   #15 
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Thanks guys im glad youre all moved by it :)
really i didnt think it was that good
im thinking about writing another, maybe a little less sad though :P
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Old 08-01-2010, 08:14 PM   #16 
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You need to do more! It was soo good!
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Old 08-01-2010, 08:14 PM   #17 
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I just wrote one... I love it!
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Old 08-02-2010, 05:47 PM   #18 
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Very nice story!
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Old 08-02-2010, 07:12 PM   #19 
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It made me cry :'(
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Old 08-04-2010, 09:58 AM   #20 
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Very nice story!, but it was also very sad.
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