The Replacement Game

[GravityKitty]

Ok, here's how you play. I'm going to start off with a sentence and each person is allowed to do only ONE of the following per turn. You can either replace a word, add a word or remove a word in the sentence. You cannot do more than one of these things in one turn, and make sure that whatever sentence you make is coherent, no "Then they did". That's not a sentence.

I'll obviously start off, the sentence is:

The light that comes off of my betta's fins is so pretty.

(Gotta make it betta related, right? )

[TaylorW]

The light that comes off of betta's fins is so pretty.

(Umm, I removed "my", am I playing this right? :P)

[LikeDiscoSuperfly]

I think you are Taylor, from my understanding anyways.

Light that comes off of a betta's fins is so pretty.

[GravityKitty]

Yes, you're playing it right =)

The light that comes off of a dinosaur's fins is so pretty.

[LikeDiscoSuperfly]

The smell that comes off of a dinosaur's fins is so pretty.

[GravityKitty]

The smell that comes off of a dinosaur's fins is so awesome.

[TaylorW]

The smell that comes off of a dinosaur's poo is so awesome.

[Betta Slave]

The smell that comes off a dinosaur's egg is so awesome.

[Strigiformes]

The smell that comes off a dinosaur's egg is awesome.

[dukie1346]

The smell that comes off a dinosaur's nose is awesome.