Haikus Anyone?

[TaylorW]

Not exactly betta art, but you could write one about bettas if you wanted to!

I want to learn how to write haikus, I think it would be a wonderful way to relieve stress and vent some emotions. Then I got a great idea- what if this forum had a thread where everyone could write and share their haikus together? I love poetry and I would enjoy reading everyone else's poems as well!

I found this awesome link that has all different types of haiku writing techniques, so I'll post it here so that anyone else is interested in writing haikus can learn along with me! http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiartjr.htm

Umm, my first haiku, any and all suggestions are welcome!

snowflakes fall
the wind blows cold
a bitter taste


Now let me see some of your haikus!

[Nutt007]

A Betta dances
It's fins glowing with color
Bubbles in a nest

:D

[Tsuhei]

Dying in a cup
New home is now five gallons
At last - Salvation

[JKfish]

those oh-so-bright eyes
captured my fluttering heart
red fins a blazing

[TaylorW]

AWWW! I love your all's betta haikus!! I need a to write a betta haiku now! XD

[lilyrazen]

Hidden in the back.
Waiting for the right person.
The last betta left.

[LikeDiscoSuperfly]

bwhahah i LOVE this thread. <3

[dramaqueen]

My room
Ablaze with brilliant colors
Bettas swimming in their tanks.

[Duncan13]

Young life is fading.
Dying slowly in a cup,
He takes his last breath.

[hailukah]

room temp sixty-five
excited I swim around
fish tank has heater