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Old 12-18-2010, 01:53 AM   #1 
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Talking Haikus Anyone?

Not exactly betta art, but you could write one about bettas if you wanted to!

I want to learn how to write haikus, I think it would be a wonderful way to relieve stress and vent some emotions. Then I got a great idea- what if this forum had a thread where everyone could write and share their haikus together? I love poetry and I would enjoy reading everyone else's poems as well!

I found this awesome link that has all different types of haiku writing techniques, so I'll post it here so that anyone else is interested in writing haikus can learn along with me! http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiartjr.htm

Umm, my first haiku, any and all suggestions are welcome!

snowflakes fall
the wind blows cold
a bitter taste


Now let me see some of your haikus!
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Old 12-18-2010, 09:18 PM   #2 
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A Betta dances
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Bubbles in a nest

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Old 12-19-2010, 01:01 AM   #3 
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Old 12-19-2010, 09:27 AM   #4 
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those oh-so-bright eyes
captured my fluttering heart
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Old 12-19-2010, 03:54 PM   #5 
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AWWW! I love your all's betta haikus!! I need a to write a betta haiku now! XD
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Old 12-22-2010, 02:14 PM   #6 
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Old 12-23-2010, 04:48 PM   #7 
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bwhahah i LOVE this thread. <3
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Old 12-30-2010, 11:45 PM   #8 
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Old 12-31-2010, 07:35 AM   #9 
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Young life is fading.
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