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Old 06-03-2011, 02:42 PM   #1 
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First time drawing a betta...

Uggh something is wrong with it! I can't exactly find what is it, I put on the best quick skin so you guys can see the lines better... I know the lips are extremely weird, but I can't bother to try to fix again, I spent over 1 hour trying to fix it already T_T









Cus I'm fixing it first before colouring it :V


Halp! >_>

I'm leaving it online on livestream meanwhile:

http://www.livestream.com/crazytranslator

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Old 06-03-2011, 03:49 PM   #2 
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I will continue later I'm tired of drawing it :V
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Old 06-03-2011, 04:38 PM   #3 
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It looks great! The only thing I see that's slightly 'off' is that the eyes are a little big, but that could be a styling choice! Really - well done!
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Old 06-03-2011, 04:44 PM   #4 
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Hmmm maybe, but you see, I'm half based on my male, and his eyes are huge;



but not as big as.. LOL you're right. lemme fix xD
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Old 06-03-2011, 05:35 PM   #5 
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I would need more pictures of your boy to properly comment, but I would definitely say proportions are a bit off. The mouth on the model looks enormous compared to the photo, but it could be the angle.

The body looks a bit short, but again it's a proportion issue...the pectoral (side) fins also don't just...uhh stick out? They're more like a very small singular area on the side of the body and fan out, gradually growing exponentially larger in size (as seen on the picture of your boy)

Other than that, I like it! The pose is very nice! Is this 3DSMax?
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Old 06-03-2011, 05:42 PM   #6 
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Nah, zbrush, never really tried 3ds tbh,, And yes, the body is quite "Squished" but that's more intentional, as like the fins are all "fat" :P

The lips are indeed wrong and I have no intention to fix it (anymore) >_>! So stay wrong it will lol!

About the pectorals... hmmm I might be able to fix that. xD
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Old 06-03-2011, 05:59 PM   #7 
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Updates, I think I fixed some stuff.. and Im getting sleepy xD







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Old 06-05-2011, 07:58 AM   #8 
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Finished.. Horrible painting because I'm too lazy to do a proper painting but looks nice :P

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Old 06-05-2011, 12:09 PM   #9 
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very neat!! I've never heard of that program before (zbrush). It's a 3d animation for your computer?? I like the way you stylized the betta, it makes it look unique, and fun! :D Great job!
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Old 06-05-2011, 03:08 PM   #10 
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yah, zbrush is more used for modeling, although it can rig, uv map and animate.. never tried though xD

but the program is quite small if you like, is around 100-200mb I think, just don't go subdividing the mesh long enough or you will burst your pc's memory! XD!
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