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Old 07-11-2011, 08:57 PM   #21 
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Heated tank? Is she a forum user? LOL. If your gonna keep using the Cliff hangars, at least write more
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Old 07-11-2011, 10:39 PM   #22 
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Old 07-11-2011, 10:54 PM   #23 
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(The chapters are gonig to get a LOT longer, I have a lot more time to write now and a few more ideas :3)

Just the sound of her voice made me want to cringe, she seemed nice, but something just didn't seem............. Right? The next few weeks were gerat, she changed my tank often, and fed me two pellets a day. One day something inside her seemed snap. She came in one day from something she called school, and started banging on my tank, yelling loudly. Anger was all over her face, but I couldn't tell why. Then she suddenly collasped, all emotions erased from her face............

(This is my last short chapter, all after this will be longer.)
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More....moooooorrrreeeee!!!!
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Old 07-11-2011, 11:33 PM   #25 
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I will later tonight :3 Right now I gotta go take a shower
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Old 07-12-2011, 08:08 AM   #26 
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Ummm... Please. WRITE MORE!!!
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Old 07-12-2011, 02:35 PM   #27 
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Two larger people ran into the room, their heavy feet jostling my tank water. The women screamed and whipped out some square of metal and started pressing random things on it. Soon she was creaming her head off into it. As all of this happened I just sat there, staring at them. The man was kneeling next the little girl, shaking her, and screaming, "Wake up Tanna!!!!" But she didn't move, only the faint up and down of her chest tld you she was alive. Soon red and blue flashing lights were flashing everywhere, and two more people dressed in blue and yellowed carried away the girl. I could tell right away I was forgotten about, just the looks on their faces was enough to tell me I'd be here awhile. Swimmimg around my tank in boredom I suddenly realized, I'd never REALLY looked around her room before. Glancing around coutiosuly (Sorry about bad spelling there) incase she had a cat. It was a large room with light blue walls, she had a twin bed in the upper left corner of her room. I was on a small table next to the bed. Getting bored, I laid of one of my favorite plants and fell asleep............................................ ..................
Chapter Two
I woke up to bright yellow sunliight filtering through the closed blinds on her, the smell of the house told me it was empty. My stomache growled, but I did my best to ignore it. Was this worst then the man that bred me? I think so, at least there I had food. Sighing, I swam boredly around my tank, then suddenly a front door slammed. I could hear footsteps, then the door opened. It was The Man. He grumbled, "She had to insist I feed her stupid fish." He poured four pellets into my tank. I hungrily gobbled them up, but I suddenly realized with a start that the man was going to leave again. I threw myself against the tank walls, if fish could cry you bet I'd be crying. But he simply walked away, closing the door behind him.

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Old 07-13-2011, 01:10 PM   #29 
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You know...you should publish a Betta Story!

CONTINUE!
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(Lol, thanks guys. But I dont know a good publisher around here and I don't have the money. i'm only 11 too lol)

Will write more tonight :)
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