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Old 07-13-2011, 02:02 PM   #31 
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Write more NOW or my minions will attack you.



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Old 07-13-2011, 03:00 PM   #32 
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lol I cant write right now
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Old 07-14-2011, 10:51 AM   #33 
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Dude, keep writing, or the bettas will eat you!
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Old 07-14-2011, 01:02 PM   #34 
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Write more NOW or my minions will attack you.



Go Minions!
Um, did you train your minions? Cause their kinda um...just bouncing? LOL
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Old 07-14-2011, 10:37 PM   #35 
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Sorry I haven't been writing, been really busy later. Will tomorrow night for sure!
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Old 07-14-2011, 11:56 PM   #36 
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I really like it but I suggest working on your sentance structure just a little. I think it would be awesome for you to write a few short stories, not so many cliff hangers, idk about everyone else but I get rather impatient haha
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Um, did you train your minions? Cause their kinda um...just bouncing? LOL

Yes. They will bounce you into writing.
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Old 07-15-2011, 11:14 AM   #38 
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come on please do more just a little
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Old 07-15-2011, 11:16 AM   #39 
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I really like it but I suggest working on your sentance structure just a little. I think it would be awesome for you to write a few short stories, not so many cliff hangers, idk about everyone else but I get rather impatient haha
what do you mean its perfect
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Old 07-15-2011, 11:27 AM   #40 
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Thanks Betta Dude :)

Going to friend's house, will write more as soon as I get home.
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