Arabella: The Royal Betta (betta story)

[UglyMuffin777]

Okay, this is my first time writing, so it'll probally suck... And it may seem totally irrevealent to bettas for the first few paragraphs, but it will become betta-ey!!! Just wait! Because I decided to start it off without the normal "betta in a petshop" theme :) kay? And comment, tell me what you think, and if I should write more, or else I won't!! The main person is Arabella, just if you haven't noticed :)

Arabella: The Royal Betta

My mind whirled with thought, as I raced up my mother's long and never-ending staircase. "How could this have happended", I thought,"Who would dare steal my mothers royal crown?"

It all started this moring, when I was shopping for flour at the Royal Market Place. I had noticed two men silently communicating in the shadows. "They are speaking with finger language!", I realized,"How suspicious!" I had recently taught myself this language so I would be able to communicate with the deaf children of my village, and I couldn't help but watch intently. Slowly the letters came to read: "Change princess, steal fortune, marry queen."

[TheBlueBettaFish]

Very good! Please continue! MOOOORE!!!

[UglyMuffin777]

Just if you wanted to know what she looked like :P

Btw: This is my ugly line art, I drew it, copied it, then colored it on adobe photoshop/paintsop with my tablet. So NO I didn't copy it from any website. :)

And just wait.... I forsee bettas in the future....

[UglyMuffin777]

**edit: scanned not copied, sorry :(

[EverythingNice55]

Ahh! Very good! Please continue! And also, please look at my Betta Fish Poem about my betta fish, Tobi. That would mean a lot to me! Thanks!

[UglyMuffin777]

Okay :D

[UglyMuffin777]

(sorry its kinda sort, but I want to end with a cliff hanger)

"Urmpf" I stifled my gasp. So many thoughts played in my head. "Change princess? Would they kidnap me? How dare they steal our money? My mother would never marry them." And so, I speed of to find myself face to face with fate.

---- Should I continue?

[Jessabell]

Yep C: Add a lot more whenever you write.

[sunrise2397]

yess!

[UglyMuffin777]

Next edition!! --

"I fear I'm to late", I worried, as my hand reached toward the door to my mother's room. Suddenly, the door flew open. Startled, in an effort to regain myself, I fell over backwards. Two hands reached toward me as I felt my head solidly strike the ground. The hands grabbed me and held me firmly in an armlock. "AHH-", my call for help abruptly cut off as one of the hands stiffled my mouth. Then darkness fell over me, and I lost all sense of control.

------ Continue???????