Betta Hauki

[bettaloverforever16]

I like writing stories and poems so I gave it a shot. By the way I know bettas don't live in the oceans, but it worked well.

Bettas of Deep Blue Seas
Jewels to everyone, young, old, and small
Swimming into our hearts forever


I would really like some criticsimism on this (Sorry for bad spelling) I would be suprised if there was none. Thanks!!

[dramaqueen]

I like it! Very nice poem.

[bettaloverforever16]

Thanks DQ!

[Midnight Bettas]

Very awesome! I really want to hear the rest.

[bettaloverforever16]

It's a poem, that's all their is. But thanks for your compliment!