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Old 08-07-2011, 12:40 AM   #1 
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Betta Haiku

Anyone else wax poetic and write haikus?

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pellet in water
OM NOM NOM NOM NOM GULP MOAR?
uneaten food? Nah.

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I hide like ninja
Behind thermometer see?
I'm invisible

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You change the water
I attack alien probe
Saved the tank again.

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Moss ball of weirdness
I swim underneath you lots
Why do I get stuck?
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Old 08-07-2011, 12:04 PM   #2 
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I can't be the only one who writes bad haikus

I'll keep at it until someone else writes some

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Fleeting bubble nest
I slave over you for hours
Water change, destroyed.

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I wiggle and beg
Cruel mistress ignores me
Just one more nom please?

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Who moved my hammock?
Who moved my moss ball and plants?
I'm in a new world

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I can stare at you
For eternity and more
Feed me pellets now.
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Old 08-07-2011, 12:22 PM   #3 
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These are awesome! I love the thermometer ninja and saving the tank! XD You're great! I've never written a haiku lol! So, I wont be adding much here :X
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Old 08-07-2011, 03:40 PM   #4 
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Haikus are easy! Each line must have a certain number of syllables - no more and no less.

First line: 5
Second line: 7
Third line: 5

Here's a simple haiku that Flambé wrote about feeding time:

om nom om nom om
nommy nommy nommy nom
nom om nom om burp


They don't have to make sense or even be any good (see my examples above). I bet you could make one if you try
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Old 08-07-2011, 03:56 PM   #5 
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Ah, this might take me a while lol!
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Old 08-07-2011, 10:06 PM   #6 
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must do house cleaning
forums beckon one more thread
dust bunnies gather

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Tempting Aquabid
Must buy more aquariums
Who needs a spare room?
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Old 08-09-2011, 10:12 PM   #7 
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Bbahahahaaaa! I love it!
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Old 08-09-2011, 10:31 PM   #8 
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...Like this?

Fishy fishy fish
Staring from a tiny cup
I must take you home

Little green betta
I know what your secret is
You want more nomies ....XD

Jiro looking calm
so lovely and serene
how your fins do shine

Kurai your so bold
My little fearless girl
The warrior fish

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Old 08-15-2011, 12:12 PM   #9 
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spawning, bettas, eggs.

they fall from the nest with grace.

Daddy catches them.




how was that?
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Very nice, guys!
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