Originally Posted by bestbettas
OMG :D I love your story & thanks for advice :) I read the stories on here and they give me a lot of inspiration so I want to type more and hopefully I get just as much feedback like you because your story is really good :)
Oh, thanks! I like your story. It starts off like a tragedy and ends very nice! At first when i read the first part of your story, i was thinking, what is this guy doing, why is it so sad. But It was yet to come to a positive climax. And when i read the part of when he threw him in a bag on the sidewalk, i was in horror lol. Very nice suspension.