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He has a rounded traditional plakat tail and the dorsal doesn't overlap the caudal much but other than that what do you see?
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The anal fin is to long, and the dorsal fin is to big and looks odd/deformed to me.
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He has a nice anal fin 
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He has a nice anal fin
i thought it was a little long, but i am still a noob at this so your probably right
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The only thing I can see is it seems like he's a bit long bodied...his dorsal doesn't really flow into his caudal but I thought the topline was decent, anal fin was a good shape, he has forward pointing rays on the dorsal and they seem to be long enough and the dragon scales seem uniform and tight looking-his dragon scaling is some of the best I have found albiet I haven't been looking long, lol.
Anything that would scream out "keep him out of the gene pool!"?
I would try to find a dragon female with better/more ray branching to improve the tail. Perhaps a shorter bodied more stout female?
Anything that would scream out "keep him out of the gene pool!"?
I would try to find a dragon female with better/more ray branching to improve the tail. Perhaps a shorter bodied more stout female?
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It's not that he is too long bodied it is more that he is narrow at the base of his tail...He needs to be thicker....If I were to breed this male it would be to a traditional PK female....He is not a good HMPK...
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His caudal is also unbalanced, it's longer on the top than the bottom. I feel like his dorsal should also open more like a fan, it's sort of awkward looking.
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